***both assignments are completed and need changes due to teacher feedback****** *****teacher feedback*******This is just your data collection plan, you won’t write your abstract until you are done –
follow the steps below: Read the section titled Quick Tip: The Quickest Revision Strategy located in Chapter 17: Revising Style: Telling Your Story
follow the steps below: Read the section titled Quick Tip: The Quickest Revision Strategy located in Chapter 17: Revising Style: Telling Your Story Clearly of your textbook (p. 101). Using the steps outlined in this section, revise any two of your body paragraphs in your argumentative paper. In this discussion forum, post your two body